I did not really get much work done this morning, as I was working, but in the afternoon I had an individual tutorial based on my industry report.
I was a little nervous about showing my industry report to my tutor, because no-one has seen it since before Christmas, when I had only 1,000 words. Now I have over 5,000 and Am a long way from where I began and I just hoped that I was on track.
After reading through my report, my tutor said, that I had just about all the content that I needed in the report, but the structure of it did not reflect the style of writing that I needed. She said that I must read through my report again and re-structure it so it becomes more evaluative, so I impose my view into my writing a little more.
This did come as a bit of a shock to me as this is the way I have always written essays, but my tutor saif that I am not at school any more, this is university level writing. Whilst I understand this, I have found that movement difficult and think that the guidelines referred to so much in tutorials do not always offer us the support we need.
Personally, I thought I had followed the guidelines, this is how I had interpreted them. I will go through the report and re-structure it, I just hope it turns out better :/
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